Sunday, June 9, 2013

My Mother paragraph

Salim ALALawi
Writing 1
Jun  , 2013
My Mother paragraph


My Mother
My mother is important to me for several reasons. First, she advised me when I was child. For example, when I was a child, I played soccer at 2:00 pm. In my country, the temperature reaches 45 C so, she told me not to play at 2:00 pm because it is dangerous for my health. Also, she helped me pick good friends and telled me who the bad friends ware, so I cod keep away from them. Third, she helped me and takes care of me. For instance, when I studied in high school last year, she reviewed the material with me before all the tests that I had, and she sat with me for two months at a hospital when I had an operation. In conclusion, my mother is one of the most important people in my life because she advises me to keep away from dangerous risks. Moreover, she teaches me about how to know the difference between the good friends and bad ones. She is a person that I can always depend on in my life.

6 comments:

  1. Excellent paragraph! She sounds like a wise woman. Can you play soccer at 2:00 in the U.S?

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  2. Thank you Nikki.

    Yes, of course. Because the temperature is different between my country and USA.

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  3. you have a strong relationship with your mother. are you miss her?

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