Thursday, June 27, 2013

Popular Place paragraph

Salim ALALawi

Writing 1

Jun 26, 2013

Popular Place Paragraph


Popular Place

This is a picture of a popular place. A display case is located at the top left corner of the picture. The display case is white and has four shelves. Next to the display case is the radio. It looks like a brown bag. Beside the black board is the thermostat. It has white, red,  and black colors which looks like the controller of the PS3. At the right part of the picture, you can see the coffee pot. It is black. In front of the black board is the waiter, and he looks like he is 37 years old. Furthermore, he is wearing a white T-shirt, and he is smoking cigarette. Behind the counter are the police man and boy. The police man looks like he is 23 years old, and he is wearing a police uniform. The boy looks like he is 11 years old, and he is wearing a yellow t-shirt. Under the boy on the floor is a red knapsack. In conclusion, this picture has a variety of objects and people of different ages. In my opinion, it is a funny picture because it seems that the boy is telling a story that is drawing the police man's and the waiter's attention.

3 comments:

  1. Good descript I imagine a picture

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  2. With all of your great details, I feel like I can see your picture in my mind!

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